Well, poor mortals, the birth of my first drabble finally has come; my most sincere excuses if it's not as gothic as I promised a few posts ago ---when the visit counter reached the 1000 visits---, but I think it's at least in a great degree of own reflection mood... Its title is The Dark Corridor and I hope you will like it!!
So, I'll be waiting for your first impressions, suggestions and complaints for each drabble I offer you, my dear Death Road Transients, in form of comments hehehe. At last, I have to say that this drabble word counting has been executed in NeoOffice 2.2.2 ---the native mac OpenOffice port--- and it returns exactly 100 words.
I walk alone through a dark corridor. It's strange, I'm seeing the bright outside through a wall of unbreakable glass but there's no light over me. I can see people; my dear people: family, friends, those special girls... I can hear them, and wow! They can hear me!!! I'm talking with them, I'm accepted in this outer world!!! but I cannot achieve them. I'm reaching the pleasure of being loved but I can't taste nor touch this gift. I'm in a prison of feelings, I'm like a gargoyle: life and friendly in isolation, but exiled in the light of sensations.
Wednesday, March 26, 2008
drabble: The Dark Corridor
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
4 comments:
Have you tried turning the lights on??? ;) kisseeeees
well... as a first impression, I must admit it has surprised me XD I think this text couldn't provoque any piece of gladness, but I was wrong I suppose :P
It's not bad. But It's a little bit strange...maybe It's me you know that I'm very simple and happy power, so this kind of stories...I think that I don't understand it at all. I'll ask you tomorrow!! ;)
Kisses
ouch! finally, I was very busy the friday night, so I wasn't able for anybody very much and I couldn't maintain a philosophic conversation about this drabble :P
Anyway, I hope you enjoyed this night, as long as I hope the other corner girls also had a nice dinner :P
c u soon!!! :)
Post a Comment